Friday, 26 July 2013

Flash Fiction Friday: Dark Summer




Dark Summer

Her perfect face tilted to the side, her hair brushed back from her face, exposing her beauty and her raised hand and perfectly manicured nails level with her mouth all gave the illusion of sleeping. Even her body, although clad in just turquoise lingerie, showed absolutely no signs of anything untoward yet as I crouched by her side, my worst fears were confirmed.
The psychopath, who had been terrorizing the city since the beginning of the year, had struck yet again and the only reason I could tell that was because of the note poking out from underneath her body slightly, addressed to me personally.



Naomi said...

What did the note say? I would love to read more of this story. Great flasher

Pablo Michaels said...

Absolutely morbid, Julez. I would like to read a continuation of your flash. Well written.

S. J. Maylee said...

Addressed to him! Oh no. This flash is freaking me out, lol. Well done. :)

Dee Little said...

Great Flash!!

Doris O'connor said...

Oohh, shivers again. I so love your dark side, Julez!

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

WOW!!! Ok you have got to continue this flash into a mystery/thriller story. Def caught my attention. Great details and so dark yet so passionate of her pose. I want to know what the note says too. Keep going with this flash! Awesome Job!