FLASH
FICTION
FRIDAY
Dark
Summer
Her
perfect face tilted to the side, her hair brushed back from her face,
exposing her beauty and her raised hand and perfectly manicured nails
level with her mouth all gave the illusion of sleeping. Even her
body, although clad in just turquoise lingerie, showed absolutely no
signs of anything untoward yet as I crouched by her side, my worst
fears were confirmed.
The
psychopath, who had been terrorizing the city since the beginning of
the year, had struck yet again and the only reason I could tell that
was because of the note poking out from underneath her body slightly,
addressed to me personally.
©JSMorbius2013
6 comments:
What did the note say? I would love to read more of this story. Great flasher
Absolutely morbid, Julez. I would like to read a continuation of your flash. Well written.
Addressed to him! Oh no. This flash is freaking me out, lol. Well done. :)
Great Flash!!
Oohh, shivers again. I so love your dark side, Julez!
WOW!!! Ok you have got to continue this flash into a mystery/thriller story. Def caught my attention. Great details and so dark yet so passionate of her pose. I want to know what the note says too. Keep going with this flash! Awesome Job!
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