Friday, 13 May 2016

Flash Fiction Friday: The beach

The beach

Watching the couple walking along the edge of the water I was about to smile when I saw the water begin to swell, as if a giant wave was about to appear out of nowhere. Frozen to the spot all I could do was watch, as the water suddenly, and inexplicably, parted.
Before the couple knew what was happening, and before I had a chance to scream out a warning, a large beast suddenly appeared from beneath the depths and dragged the two of them back under the water, leaving the sea looking as though it had never been disturbed.



The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Holy smokes. I wasn't expecting that part in the end. Nice piece.

Angelica Dawson said...

Whoa! Where did that come from? Frightening! Great flash.

Doris O'connor said...

Oh, deliciously dark!

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Wow I was not expecting that twist! Awesome flash Julez!!!