Reunited
I couldn't believe my eyes when your name first came up on my PC. It
had been so many years since we spoke, let alone seen each other but
there you were, your image staring back at me from the screen, your
friend request just waiting for an answer. Hurriedly I accepted, then
sent you a quick thank you message.
The next few weeks rushed by as we talked about the past, and the
present, until we arranged to meet for a coffee. Only when the day
came the weather changed, from the excessive summer heat we had been
enjoying into the heaviest thunderstorm for months, yet even that
couldn't ruin the day, and the coffee was soon forgotten.
Grabbing
your hand I stared deep into your eyes, saw the sign I was looking
for and pulled you close. Wrapping my arms around your waist I pulled
your close, and placed my lips against yours. As the rain soaked us
both to the skin, our clothes becoming more and more like a second
skin, I could feel your heart pounding against my chest, just as it
had the first time we kissed, all those years earlier.
©JSMorbius
9 comments:
Damn Julez! Very romantic; a vivid piece that had me intrigued to read more. You get thumbs up on this one!
Excellent passion and desire. I loved the emotional details.
Wow! Julez! Very nice, a sweet romantic piece. I like it!
Aw, such a sweet, romantic tease, Julez. I loved it :-)
absolutely love this <3
Exquisite piece of writing Julez. You combined the necessary elements of nature to create the mood necessary for a touching yet meaningful romantic experience. I applaud this tease as one of your very best. Why not expand it into a more detailed story?
Sorry I didn't comment sooner, Julez. I missed this post. So glad I caught it on another group page. Very romantic, the longing, the yearning the young love reigniting drawing the lovers to a time of purity and soulful discovery--innocence lost and regained. Ah, to make that trip myself once again. Beautifully written. You touched my heart. xo
So romantic, a spark rekindled despite the bad weather. Love your teaser
A lovely tease and a beautiful couple.
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