Tuesday, 20 January 2015

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser: Reunited




Reunited

I couldn't believe my eyes when your name first came up on my PC. It had been so many years since we spoke, let alone seen each other but there you were, your image staring back at me from the screen, your friend request just waiting for an answer. Hurriedly I accepted, then sent you a quick thank you message.
The next few weeks rushed by as we talked about the past, and the present, until we arranged to meet for a coffee. Only when the day came the weather changed, from the excessive summer heat we had been enjoying into the heaviest thunderstorm for months, yet even that couldn't ruin the day, and the coffee was soon forgotten.
Grabbing your hand I stared deep into your eyes, saw the sign I was looking for and pulled you close. Wrapping my arms around your waist I pulled your close, and placed my lips against yours. As the rain soaked us both to the skin, our clothes becoming more and more like a second skin, I could feel your heart pounding against my chest, just as it had the first time we kissed, all those years earlier.


©JSMorbius

9 comments:

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Damn Julez! Very romantic; a vivid piece that had me intrigued to read more. You get thumbs up on this one!

Kendel Davi said...

Excellent passion and desire. I loved the emotional details.

Debra Marie Greene said...

Wow! Julez! Very nice, a sweet romantic piece. I like it!

Doris O'connor said...

Aw, such a sweet, romantic tease, Julez. I loved it :-)

Raven McAllan said...

absolutely love this <3

Pablo Michaels said...

Exquisite piece of writing Julez. You combined the necessary elements of nature to create the mood necessary for a touching yet meaningful romantic experience. I applaud this tease as one of your very best. Why not expand it into a more detailed story?

Muffy Wilson said...

Sorry I didn't comment sooner, Julez. I missed this post. So glad I caught it on another group page. Very romantic, the longing, the yearning the young love reigniting drawing the lovers to a time of purity and soulful discovery--innocence lost and regained. Ah, to make that trip myself once again. Beautifully written. You touched my heart. xo

Naomi said...

So romantic, a spark rekindled despite the bad weather. Love your teaser

Angelica Dawson said...

A lovely tease and a beautiful couple.