As it's Tuesday I guess it's time for another tease. This week though I have struggled a little but, luckily for me, one of the poor unfortunate souls deep within The Crypt regaled me with this tale to chill your blood.
Of course once you have read my tease the Dark Souls will be most disappointed if you don't go to the following link and see what all my mortal friends have for you this week, and disappointed Dark Souls are not something you want to see.
Our first date
( A tale from beyond the grave)
As I walked through
the cemetery with the sun slowly staring to go down, and the shadows
becoming longer, I saw her sitting on the very same polished marble
slab I first laid my eyes on her, and where I became instantly
intoxicated by her pale beauty.
Looking just as
stunning as always in her sleeveless, Gothic mini dress and knee high
boots, with five inch stiletto heels, I walked as quietly as I could
and tried to creep up on her. Sabine though seemed to have a sixth
sense and, before I was within six feet of her, she turned her head,
smiled in my direction and stood up.
“So glad you
came,” Sabine said. “It's been so long since I had an actual
date.”
“I can't see why,
you really are very beautiful,” I replied, turning on the charm.
Not that I didn't
mean it, because I did, but because I also knew a little flattery was
always appreciated.
“So what do you
want to so, Sabine?”
“I'm sure we could
think of something,” Sabine whispered, with a smile, before leaning
forward, sinking her teeth into my neck and slowly draining every
drop of blood from my body.
©JSMorbius
7 comments:
I guess one of your friend's from deep within the crypt influenced you this week!! It seemed so soft and easy at the beginning, then - BAM! Teeth! This tale was twisted: first because he felt the need to creep up on her, then they knew one another and then - BAM! Teeth! What a surprise, Julez. Loved it. xo
Holy shit, that was a hell of a twist Julez! Very chilling and unexpected; good!
I wasn't expect that at all...great piece
I loved the build up to the thrill
Prey turned hunter, or did the prey fall into the trap? great piece man
Fantastic tease. Just an edit note, the so in the second last paragraph should be do. (like I said in another teaser comment, it doesn't ruin the effect, but if you're continuing or submitting, it's better to catch those things now)
Jeez, I knew something was coming... but bam. Loved it. All so romantic till the last sentence.
Awesome tease, Julez.
Great teaser. That last sentence was the killer, I wasn't expecting it.
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