Tuesday, 23 September 2014

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser: Our first date ( A tale from beyond the grave)



As it's Tuesday I guess it's time for another tease. This week though I have struggled a little but, luckily for me, one of the poor unfortunate souls deep within The Crypt regaled me with this tale to chill your blood.

Of course once you have read my tease the Dark Souls will be most disappointed if you don't go to the following link and see what all my mortal friends have for you this week, and disappointed Dark Souls are not something you want to see.




Our first date ( A tale from beyond the grave)

As I walked through the cemetery with the sun slowly staring to go down, and the shadows becoming longer, I saw her sitting on the very same polished marble slab I first laid my eyes on her, and where I became instantly intoxicated by her pale beauty.
Looking just as stunning as always in her sleeveless, Gothic mini dress and knee high boots, with five inch stiletto heels, I walked as quietly as I could and tried to creep up on her. Sabine though seemed to have a sixth sense and, before I was within six feet of her, she turned her head, smiled in my direction and stood up.
“So glad you came,” Sabine said. “It's been so long since I had an actual date.”
“I can't see why, you really are very beautiful,” I replied, turning on the charm.
Not that I didn't mean it, because I did, but because I also knew a little flattery was always appreciated.
“So what do you want to so, Sabine?”
“I'm sure we could think of something,” Sabine whispered, with a smile, before leaning forward, sinking her teeth into my neck and slowly draining every drop of blood from my body.


©JSMorbius

7 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

I guess one of your friend's from deep within the crypt influenced you this week!! It seemed so soft and easy at the beginning, then - BAM! Teeth! This tale was twisted: first because he felt the need to creep up on her, then they knew one another and then - BAM! Teeth! What a surprise, Julez. Loved it. xo

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Holy shit, that was a hell of a twist Julez! Very chilling and unexpected; good!

Mangus Khan said...

I wasn't expect that at all...great piece

Joe DaVerbal Minddancer said...

I loved the build up to the thrill
Prey turned hunter, or did the prey fall into the trap? great piece man

Angelica Dawson said...

Fantastic tease. Just an edit note, the so in the second last paragraph should be do. (like I said in another teaser comment, it doesn't ruin the effect, but if you're continuing or submitting, it's better to catch those things now)

Doris O'connor said...

Jeez, I knew something was coming... but bam. Loved it. All so romantic till the last sentence.

Awesome tease, Julez.

Naomi said...

Great teaser. That last sentence was the killer, I wasn't expecting it.