After reading my flash I hope you will take the time to visit my friends, who are also taking part this week, and see what this picture inspired them write
Meeting my new
master
Pushing the door
open I walked in. The room was pitch black and I couldn't see a damn
thing.
“Stop there!”
His voice bellowed from out before the darkness lifted just enough
for me to see him and, as soon as I did, I felt my knees go instantly
weak.
He was sitting casually on the leather sofa, dressed impeccably in suit
and tie and even more handsome than I had been led to believe.
Suddenly the door I
had entered by slammed and as I turned to see why I felt him right
behind me, his ice cold breath on my neck.
©JSMorbius
10 comments:
Yummy, spooky kink! ;)
Geez, Julez...that sent a chill down my spine and a searing electric bolt to my heart paralyzing it for a moment. Whoa.. xo
Wonderfully creepy. Shiver.
Oooh, I sense there's more at play here. Great flash!
Oooh, I sense there's more at play here. Great flash!
Whoa! Very chilling dude!
Please say this is going to be a longer story, maybe even a book! I so love this opening and the images in my mind!
chilling tease ...well written
Your closing sentence was perfect for your flash, setting the mood disticntly. "Suddenly the door I had entered by slammed and as I turned to see why I felt him right behind me, his ice cold breath on my neck."
Great surprise ending.
Shivers, I loved it! This had me rubbing my neck. Oh so vampy. :) Great flash! I agree this needs a longer story. :)
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