Friday, 25 July 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: Meeting my new master

After reading my flash I hope you will take the time to visit my friends, who are also taking part this week, and see what this picture inspired them write



Meeting my new master

Pushing the door open I walked in. The room was pitch black and I couldn't see a damn thing.
“Stop there!” His voice bellowed from out before the darkness lifted just enough for me to see him and, as soon as I did, I felt my knees go instantly weak. 
He was sitting casually on the leather sofa, dressed impeccably in suit and tie and even more handsome than I had been led to believe.
Suddenly the door I had entered by slammed and as I turned to see why I felt him right behind me, his ice cold breath on my neck.



©JSMorbius


10 comments:

Naughty Nights Press (NNP); Gina Kincade said...

Yummy, spooky kink! ;)

Muffy Wilson said...

Geez, Julez...that sent a chill down my spine and a searing electric bolt to my heart paralyzing it for a moment. Whoa.. xo

Angelica Dawson said...

Wonderfully creepy. Shiver.

Doris O'connor said...

Oooh, I sense there's more at play here. Great flash!

Doris O'connor said...

Oooh, I sense there's more at play here. Great flash!

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Whoa! Very chilling dude!

Anna said...

Please say this is going to be a longer story, maybe even a book! I so love this opening and the images in my mind!

Mangus Khan said...

chilling tease ...well written

Pablo Michaels said...

Your closing sentence was perfect for your flash, setting the mood disticntly. "Suddenly the door I had entered by slammed and as I turned to see why I felt him right behind me, his ice cold breath on my neck."

Great surprise ending.

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Shivers, I loved it! This had me rubbing my neck. Oh so vampy. :) Great flash! I agree this needs a longer story. :)