Tuesday, 29 July 2014

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser: Beautiful things come to those who wait

It's Tuesday Tease Time, that's tease not tea so put down that sandwich and pay attention. Each week myself and a group of talented authors, who I am honored to call friends, each choose one image and then write a short, no more than 200 word, piece of fiction to tantalize and tease you.

My friends can all be found at

so I hope you pop over and see what they have for you this week and if you think this is something you'd enjoy taking part in every Tuesday, and you are on Facebook, why not ask to join the group, meet the peeps and have fun.


Beautiful things come to those who wait

As I sat on the luxurious sofa, a Jack and coke in my hand, I stared intently at the double doors Kim had disappeared through five minutes earlier. Telling me she would call me when she was ready I knew this was going to be the night we had both waited six months for, the night we would finally expose ourselves totally to each other, the night we would make love for the first time.
“I'm ready now, baby.”
Draining my glass I stood up, walked over to the doors and tapped lightly on the wood.
“Are you sure you're really ready, babe?”
“Just get in here, we've both waited long enough for tonight.”
Gripping the handle I turned it slowly, pushed the door open and stepped inside, to see Kim sitting on the bed. Sitting there in just black cotton panties, her denim shorts discarded by the end of her feet, her firm breasts and erect nipples exposed to me for the first time, Kim was the most beautiful woman I had ever seen.
“I kept the panties on though,” Kim purred, “because I really wanted you to be the one to finally release my cock.”



Anonymous said...

Beautifully done! Anticipation and almost fruition! Great tease!

Doris O'connor said...

Just perfect, Julez :-)

Muffy Wilson said...

So beautifully written, Julez. I hope the 'release' was exactly what he was expecting and anticipating for 6 months. Otherwise, this story takes a dark turn. Great teaser. xo

Angelica Dawson said...

wonderfully teasing.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Julez, you know how to keep a dick hard and a pussy wet! LOL. This is by far an awesome piece!