First Date
Finally reaching her
destination, and with the torrential rain soaking her to the skin,
Julie ran her fingers through her hair. Even though she knew she must
have looked like a drowned rat she also knew there was no backing
down now. Walking up the stairs to the front door Julie rang the
bell, and waited.
The two of them had
been chatting online for six months and, over that time, they had
grown closer and closer until they finally admitted their true
feelings for each other, even though neither of them had ever been in
a same sex relationship before.
©JSMorbius
6 comments:
Love it. I hope their meeting in reality is a happy one
Great storytelling :)
Ah, lovely :-)
Man, I really love your work. If you ever write a f/f story, I'd like to review your work - again! Great story!
I loved the build up and tension. The first time I was with a woman was nerve jolting. One is almost overwhelmed by nerves even tho you know them so well. Far more nerve racking than any other traditional first date. Electrically charged, Julez, as is fittingm :) xo
Omg! This is awesome. I love how you lead up to the climax. The suspense awesome and I loved the emotion. Awesome flash!
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