Friday, 25 April 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: Selected


Whatever I had been given had drained every ounce of my strength and, as I felt my naked body being dragged across the marble floor, I was powerless to fight back.
“What about this one, Mistress?”
“Bring him closer.”
I was dragged a few more feet before my hair was released, and I collapsed in a heap. As I struggled to lift my head I could hear the tapping of stiletto heels, coming closer.
“This one will make an excellent addition to our army,” I heard the woman say, just before her fangs sank deep in to my neck.



Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

OMG! This is awesome. You have to write more on this. Make it into a story. There is so much going on in this flash. I love the suspense and I wonder how he ended up in this situation and I love that its vampire and she's a mistress too. :)

Doris O'connor said...

Oh my goodness! Incredibly tense 100 words. You gave me goosebumps!