FLASH
FICTION
FRIDAY
The impossible visitor
As I unlocked the door to the bedroom, for the first time since
buying the house, I pushed it open and froze.
What I was seeing was impossible yet there she was, the most
beautiful woman I had ever seen, wearing a blood red dress. laying
back on the covered sofa. Her heaving breasts were only just covered
and, as she turned her head to look at me she raised her knee, and
exposed her smooth, pale, thigh.
“What the fuck!” I bellowed in shock.
“Save me, please,” the woman pleaded, before disappearing in to
thin air.
©JSMorbius2014
8 comments:
Oh, wow, I love it. This throws up so many questions. Who is she? What is she? What does she need saving from?
Great tease, Julez
Spooky!
Cool! You have to write more of this story, pretty please. :D
excellent! I'd too love to know more!
Great Flash. Leaves you wondering what is going on?
Oh wow! I didn't see that ending. I hope there's going to be more.
Kay
Holy wow, Julez!! That was fabulous....this needs an entire story. I love this :) xo
Oh what a great story this could be. love the mystique
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