Friday, 3 January 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: The impossible visitor




The impossible visitor

As I unlocked the door to the bedroom, for the first time since buying the house, I pushed it open and froze.
What I was seeing was impossible yet there she was, the most beautiful woman I had ever seen, wearing a blood red dress. laying back on the covered sofa. Her heaving breasts were only just covered and, as she turned her head to look at me she raised her knee, and exposed her smooth, pale, thigh.
“What the fuck!” I bellowed in shock.
“Save me, please,” the woman pleaded, before disappearing in to thin air.



Doris O'connor said...

Oh, wow, I love it. This throws up so many questions. Who is she? What is she? What does she need saving from?

Great tease, Julez

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S.J. Maylee said...

Cool! You have to write more of this story, pretty please. :D

Dee Little said...

excellent! I'd too love to know more!

Michaela Rhua said...

Great Flash. Leaves you wondering what is going on?

LoveBites AndSilk said...

Oh wow! I didn't see that ending. I hope there's going to be more.


Muffy Wilson said...

Holy wow, Julez!! That was fabulous....this needs an entire story. I love this :) xo

Michelle Howard said...

Oh what a great story this could be. love the mystique