Tuesday, 3 December 2013

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser: Death by chocolate

Death by chocolate

Going back out into the hallway Sandi stepped over his body, made her way towards the bathroom and turned on the shower . Climbing under the jets she allowed the water to cascade over her body before smothering herself in shower gel and scrubbing every inch of her body, until she was almost raw.
Fucking prick got what he deserved she thought, as the shower washed the soap from her body. Cheating on me with that fucking bitch. 
She closed her eyes and thought back to the day she had walked in and caught him, naked in bed and drizzling the chocolate body paint over their neighbor. That had been the final straw for her, it wasn't the first time and probably wouldn't have been the last and as she had stewed on his infidelity hatred had burnt through her soul. Well she had made sure he wouldn't cheat on heror anyone else again. 
As she stepped out of the shower and wrapped a towel around her nakedness she looked towards him, for one last time, with a smile on her lips and stared at the half a dozen bars of chocolate she had choked him with still sticking out of his mouth, melting slowly.



Muffy Wilson said...

WOW, Julez, that is some thrilling teaser! He calm deliberation about her revenge made this story unbelievably tense. God knows, most women have entertained the thought at one time or another so living through your short vicariously is a fait accompli for those of us that just harbored the desire! One of your very best pieces, Julez. I held my breath all the way through it!!:) xo

Molly Synthia said...

That was chilling, Julez. It was also very, very well written. Loved it!

Doris O'connor said...

They do say revenge is best served cold. Chilling teaser indeed. Loved it.