Friday, 29 November 2013

Flash Fiction Friday: Running


FLASH

FICTION

FRIDAY



Running

I was exhausted. I had been running for what felt like hours. My torso, arms, legs and feet were torn to shreds from the thick forest but I finally felt safe enough to stop. I had to, I needed to get my breath back and besides they'd have surely given up chasing me by now yet I knew I couldn't risk them catching me so, as soon as I felt able, I began running again.
One thing I knew for definite though was that, no matter how much money was offered, I would never fill in as a stripper for a hen party again.

©JSMorbius


8 comments:

Pablo Michaels said...

Hilarious surprise twist. I never expected a hen party for this man as a stripper. Well done.

Naomi said...

I love the twist. Made me laugh. Poor man. Great flasher

Michaela Rhua said...

Loved the last line, made me laugh out loud! Fab x

Muffy Wilson said...

Oh, Julez, you set me up for a different ending that is sure!! I loved it AND the surprise ending. LOL :) xo

Dee Little said...

Haha such a good one!

Naughty Nights Press (NNP); Gina Kincade said...

*grin* Nice twist, Julez. ;)

Doris O'connor said...

LOLOLOL! Oh that last line was priceless. You'd completely pulled me into the story, and then this, lol. Excellent :-)

gemma parkes said...

Brilliant Julez! I was so absorbed in your flash and then the last line took me by surprise, so funny!