FLASH
FICTION
FRIDAY
Running
I was exhausted. I had been running for what felt like hours. My
torso, arms, legs and feet were torn to shreds from the thick forest
but I finally felt safe enough to stop. I had to, I needed to get my
breath back and besides they'd have surely given up chasing me by now
yet I knew I couldn't risk them catching me so, as soon as I felt
able, I began running again.
One thing I knew for definite though was that, no matter how much
money was offered, I would never fill in as a stripper for a hen
party again.
©JSMorbius
8 comments:
Hilarious surprise twist. I never expected a hen party for this man as a stripper. Well done.
I love the twist. Made me laugh. Poor man. Great flasher
Loved the last line, made me laugh out loud! Fab x
Oh, Julez, you set me up for a different ending that is sure!! I loved it AND the surprise ending. LOL :) xo
Haha such a good one!
*grin* Nice twist, Julez. ;)
LOLOLOL! Oh that last line was priceless. You'd completely pulled me into the story, and then this, lol. Excellent :-)
Brilliant Julez! I was so absorbed in your flash and then the last line took me by surprise, so funny!
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