Return to
Paradise
After weeks trekking
through the jungle trying to find the waterfall I finally found
myself staring at exactly what I had been looking for, the place
where I had first laid my eyes on the woman that had consumed my
thoughts ever since.
Only that day, as
soon as she saw me watching her from the very spot I was standing on
now, she swam through the waterfall and vanished. I tried to follow
and swam after her but once through the waterfall I had found myself
alone, in a large cavern, she was nowhere to be seen.
©JSMorbius2013
8 comments:
I hope he finds her on his return visit. Definitely a disturbing frustration not to find her and explore the possibilities.
Ooh, that really makes you wonder. Who/what is she? Why did she disappear? Will he find her again? Great stuff, Julez.
Nice and mysterious, great tease.
Lovely piece Julez, hope he finds her!
Wonderful tease Julez! I love unrequited love with a dash of panicked obcession, don't you?:) xo
Great flasher. I so hope he finds her to gain happiness
Ohh who could she be? A magical maiden of the jungle? I def want to know who she is and if he ever finds her. Awesome post. :)
So sad and mysterious. This flash deserves a part two with a happy ending. Pretty please :)
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