Thursday, 24 January 2013

Flash Fiction Friday: The Perfect Girlfriend

Welcome Creatures of the Night to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. Along with a number of other talented authors each week we are given one picture and challenged to write not more than 100 words for your enjoyment.

Please don't forget that, at the end of my post I shall be providing the names of all the other talented flashers taking part this week.

Thank you.

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The Perfect Girlfriend

Perfect babe just hold right there.”
I began clicking away with the camera, making sure I had the one picture that would blow the judges away as much as I had been the first time I saw her.
Are you sure this is okay?”
Baby it's better than okay, you are bound to win.”
You know what I mean.”
A lone tear slowly rolled down her cheek.
Listen to me Maya you are easily the best looking girl entering.”
I meant it as well. She may have been a transsexual but she was also the perfect girlfriend.


S. J. Maylee:


gemma parkes said...

So much portrayed in so few words, well done

S. J. Maylee said...

He's one lucky guy, only wish she could feel how he felt about her, insecurities are a cruel lot. You've painted a vivid and real flash. Well done, Julez.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

A very complimenting post to give here. It is vivid and realistic. A very good flash here!

Naomi said...

You captured the whole picture excellently in your alotted 100 words. Excellent flasher