Welcome Creatures of the Night to my second Tantalizing Tuesday entry. I hope you are all sitting comfortably.
THE DOOR
“There’s no fucking way
I’m going down there,” Lisa gasped as she looked down at the large wooden door
at the bottom of the stairs.
“Why not?” Kyle asked.
“I thought you weren’t scared of anything.”
“Who said I was
scared?”
“You sound like you are
and it was you who said you weren’t scared of anything.”
“I know but...”
“You know what Lisa
just forget it.”
“Fuck you Kyle!!!” Lisa
shouted as she began to descend the stairs.
Kyle smiled as he
followed her, watching her every footstep, listening as her breath began to
race. He loved bringing girls here because they never suspected a thing, not
until it was too late anyway.
With each step she took
he felt the excitement growing in his body. Three
more steps then she will be mine for eternity he thought.
As she stepped off the
last step she looked at him.
“Open it then Lisa,”
Kyle said his excitement at fever pitch.
“Kyle there’s something
you should know first,” Lisa said.
“What’s that?”
“You’re not the only vampire that knows about
this place,” she said pouncing forward, her fangs finding the warm, pulsing
vein that she so desperately craved.
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17 comments:
I loved how you twisted it at the end! Exciting read! Loved it!
Great teaser! I love the twist!
You are a wonderfully twisted and evil writer! Love it! Love it!
Turn about is fair play, Julez. This was just great! She seduced him into a calm sense of control and anticipation, but she was the more skilled at execution. Great twist:) xo
Awesome teaser, I love the neat twist in the end.
Awesome post Julez. I love how he was preening with anticipation and then the tides are turned. So...what happens now?
The way you wrapped the words around the picture is so very well done. Very nice sexy man.
Lovely twist there! Now I'm wondering if they'll kill each other or become mates... Interesting.
Loved the twist at the end!! She's ready for him, not the other way around. Great teaser!
Great twist Julez! Loved it!
*snort* Great post. He's not as smooth as he thinks he is...and Lisa is quite clever.
Hmm, the hunter gets captured by the game. I wonder how many unsuspecting souls she has drained by pretending to be innocent? It's the quiet ones you have to watch out for. Ms Lisa is an accomplished blood-sucker.
Ooooo...I loved the twist at the end! Excellent job, Julez, I could see the scene clearly in my mind.
You know, Lisa gave him an out. She gave him a chance, but he insisted on hunting her...but she got the trophy in the end. Loved it!
Loved the twist at the end! This was one fabulous TT. I love how you built the tension.
Fantastic teaser! Love how she turned the tables on him.
Awesome Tease, loved it. The twist at the end was wonderful and surprised the Heck out of me. The build up of suspense was great. I was just waiting for something to happen and figured it would be him pouncing. Nope, was her..good for her, he deserved to be paid back for all the other girls he "conned" and played, don't you think?
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