Tuesday, 1 May 2012

The Door (A Tantalising Tuesday Teaser)


Welcome Creatures of the Night to my second Tantalizing Tuesday entry. I hope you are all sitting comfortably.




THE DOOR
“There’s no fucking way I’m going down there,” Lisa gasped as she looked down at the large wooden door at the bottom of the stairs.
“Why not?” Kyle asked. “I thought you weren’t scared of anything.”
“Who said I was scared?”
“You sound like you are and it was you who said you weren’t scared of anything.”
“I know but...”
“You know what Lisa just forget it.”
“Fuck you Kyle!!!” Lisa shouted as she began to descend the stairs.
Kyle smiled as he followed her, watching her every footstep, listening as her breath began to race. He loved bringing girls here because they never suspected a thing, not until it was too late anyway.
With each step she took he felt the excitement growing in his body. Three more steps then she will be mine for eternity he thought.
As she stepped off the last step she looked at him.
“Open it then Lisa,” Kyle said his excitement at fever pitch.
“Kyle there’s something you should know first,” Lisa said.
“What’s that?”
 “You’re not the only vampire that knows about this place,” she said pouncing forward, her fangs finding the warm, pulsing vein that she so desperately craved. 

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17 comments:

Leann Mitchell said...

I loved how you twisted it at the end! Exciting read! Loved it!

Naomi said...

Great teaser! I love the twist!

Molly Synthia said...

You are a wonderfully twisted and evil writer! Love it! Love it!

Muffy Wilson said...

Turn about is fair play, Julez. This was just great! She seduced him into a calm sense of control and anticipation, but she was the more skilled at execution. Great twist:) xo

Don Abdul said...

Awesome teaser, I love the neat twist in the end.

ER Pierce said...

Awesome post Julez. I love how he was preening with anticipation and then the tides are turned. So...what happens now?

Cassandre Dayne said...

The way you wrapped the words around the picture is so very well done. Very nice sexy man.

diannehartsock said...

Lovely twist there! Now I'm wondering if they'll kill each other or become mates... Interesting.

Bonni S. said...

Loved the twist at the end!! She's ready for him, not the other way around. Great teaser!

gemma parkes said...

Great twist Julez! Loved it!

Lee Brazil said...

*snort* Great post. He's not as smooth as he thinks he is...and Lisa is quite clever.

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Hmm, the hunter gets captured by the game. I wonder how many unsuspecting souls she has drained by pretending to be innocent? It's the quiet ones you have to watch out for. Ms Lisa is an accomplished blood-sucker.

Nichelle Gregory said...

Ooooo...I loved the twist at the end! Excellent job, Julez, I could see the scene clearly in my mind.

Havan said...

You know, Lisa gave him an out. She gave him a chance, but he insisted on hunting her...but she got the trophy in the end. Loved it!

VenusBookluvr said...

Loved the twist at the end! This was one fabulous TT. I love how you built the tension.

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Fantastic teaser! Love how she turned the tables on him.

Sherry Palmer said...

Awesome Tease, loved it. The twist at the end was wonderful and surprised the Heck out of me. The build up of suspense was great. I was just waiting for something to happen and figured it would be him pouncing. Nope, was her..good for her, he deserved to be paid back for all the other girls he "conned" and played, don't you think?