Friday, 10 June 2016

Flash Fiction Friday: Sacrifice


Hearing the rushing water was such a relief, as I'd been walking through the jungle in the scorching heat for hours. Desperate to cool down I walked through a gap in the trees, closer towards the sound but suddenly froze.
Less than fifty feet in front of me, totally naked, were two of the most beautiful women I'd ever seen. One of them had their hands bound, to a jagged rock, above their head. The other pressed her naked body against her, kissed her passionately and then stepped back, before plunging an ornamental dagger in to her heart.



Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

WOW!!! Julez!! I was not expecting that ending. Awesome!!! I loved it!! I need to read more of what stirred up this new flash. :O)

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Holy shit! I wasn't expecting that scene. Interesting piece. I would hate to be the witness. Nice post.

Doris O'connor said...

Eeek, that ending came as a shock. Fabulous!