My last gift
to you
Reaching forward I
offered you the box, just before collapsing at your feet. As you tore
the box open the last thing I saw was the colour drain from your
face, before finally waking to find myself wired to machines and
surrounded by nurses.
“He's back with
us, doctor,” one of the nurses called out, before looking down at
me with a sympathetic smile. “I'm so sorry, we tried everything we
could.”
Gingerly I lifted
the sheets, and stared down. Seeing the blood stained bandages
covering my groin I remembered the look of horror on your face, as
you opened my last gift to you.
©JSMorbius
Hope you have enjoyed my chilling little flash and you now take the time to visit all my friends and see what delights they have in store for you this week.
Thank you
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5 comments:
Eek, what a bloody sample!
Shudder...I was so not expecting that.
Ouch! Now that's a shocker lol
Ohh Wow!! That had me on the edge of my seat. *winces in pain* Poor guy. I def want to know what lead up to that box surprise. Great flash!! Def full of suspense. Loved the details.
Oh.my.gooodness!
Fab Flash!
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