Friday, 18 July 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: My last gift to you



My last gift to you

Reaching forward I offered you the box, just before collapsing at your feet. As you tore the box open the last thing I saw was the colour drain from your face, before finally waking to find myself wired to machines and surrounded by nurses.
“He's back with us, doctor,” one of the nurses called out, before looking down at me with a sympathetic smile. “I'm so sorry, we tried everything we could.”
Gingerly I lifted the sheets, and stared down. Seeing the blood stained bandages covering my groin I remembered the look of horror on your face, as you opened my last gift to you.

©JSMorbius

Hope you have enjoyed my chilling little flash and you now take the time to visit all my friends and see what delights they have in store for you this week.

Thank you


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5 comments:

Angelica Dawson said...

Eek, what a bloody sample!

Anna said...

Shudder...I was so not expecting that.

Jorja Lovett said...

Ouch! Now that's a shocker lol

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Ohh Wow!! That had me on the edge of my seat. *winces in pain* Poor guy. I def want to know what lead up to that box surprise. Great flash!! Def full of suspense. Loved the details.

Doris O'connor said...

Oh.my.gooodness!
Fab Flash!