Condemned
I could only watch as Adonia bowed her head and wept, the crystal
clear tears trickling over her pale cheeks before falling between her
trembling cleavage. Her heartache was obvious to everyone who knew
her and I desperately wanted to take her in my arms and tell her how
much I truly loved her, how everything would be okay, but that wasn't
ever going to happen unless she somehow found the exact words needed.
Yet until that day came I had been condemned, thanks to the twisted
jealousy of my brother, to spend eternity trapped in the solid gold
of this damn statue.
©JSMorbius
5 comments:
THAT is FANTASTIC, and gave me goosebumps.
Great flash. Love the line'crystal tears trickling...'
Such emotion! Loved it, Julez :-)
What a fabulous twist and beautifully done too.
Shivers!! Wow that was intense. I love the twist at the end. Need to write more of this story. I wonder if she'll ever release him and find out the truth of what his evil brother did. Awesome flash!
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