FLASH
FICTION
FRIDAY
Holly's surprise
“How long have you been seeing her?” Holly asked, a look of shock
on her face, as I entered the kitchen.
Glancing at the screen I smiled at the image of the most beautiful
woman I had ever met, a woman I had been dating for the last two
months.
“A few weeks, that's all.”
“So why didn't you tell me?” Holly asked.
“Because I didn't know how you'd react to her being, you know,
transsexual.”
“Why would that bother me?” Holly asked. “You're my younger
brother and, after everything we've been through, I just want you to
be happy.”
©JSMorbius
http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.co.uk/2014/01/24-january-2014.html
11 comments:
Aw, this one made me smile. Great flash as usual, Julez :-)
Holly and he have a good sibling relationship. I wish Holly was my sister. Great writing as usual!
Wonderful flash as usual, Julez and a wonderful message. Happiness comes in all shapes, all sizes, all colors and all genders. If we could concentrate on the the things that matter most, we would all be happier. :) xo
That's right! You tell him Holly. I'm imagining the happy smile on his face. So sweet. :)
This is kind of a sweet piece.
Lovely relationship between them :)
great brother sister interaction.... well done :)
How much do I love this? Oh, you make such a beautiful picture in just 100 words. Not just good job, but thank you for sharing such a sweet moment.
Oh, this is SO sweet! I love sibling stuff. Definitely a feel good piece :-)
Tender caring flash with brother/sister love. Good one
Awesome flash! I love the support she gives to her brother. At first I thought uh oh he's in trouble, I loved how you turned it at the end. Awesome job!
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