Friday, 24 January 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: Holly's surprise


FLASH

FICTION


FRIDAY



Holly's surprise

 “How long have you been seeing her?” Holly asked, a look of shock on her face, as I entered the kitchen.
Glancing at the screen I smiled at the image of the most beautiful woman I had ever met, a woman I had been dating for the last two months.
“A few weeks, that's all.”
“So why didn't you tell me?” Holly asked.
“Because I didn't know how you'd react to her being, you know, transsexual.”
“Why would that bother me?” Holly asked. “You're my younger brother and, after everything we've been through, I just want you to be happy.”

©JSMorbius

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12 comments:

Doris O'connor said...

Aw, this one made me smile. Great flash as usual, Julez :-)

Pablo Michaels said...

Holly and he have a good sibling relationship. I wish Holly was my sister. Great writing as usual!

Muffy Wilson said...

Wonderful flash as usual, Julez and a wonderful message. Happiness comes in all shapes, all sizes, all colors and all genders. If we could concentrate on the the things that matter most, we would all be happier. :) xo

S.J. Maylee said...

That's right! You tell him Holly. I'm imagining the happy smile on his face. So sweet. :)

Decadent Kane said...

This is kind of a sweet piece.

Jorja Lovett said...

Lovely relationship between them :)

Theresa Stuart said...

great brother sister interaction.... well done :)

Fierce Dolan said...

That's awesome!!

Brantwijn Serrah said...

How much do I love this? Oh, you make such a beautiful picture in just 100 words. Not just good job, but thank you for sharing such a sweet moment.

Dariel Raye said...

Oh, this is SO sweet! I love sibling stuff. Definitely a feel good piece :-)

Naomi said...

Tender caring flash with brother/sister love. Good one

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Awesome flash! I love the support she gives to her brother. At first I thought uh oh he's in trouble, I loved how you turned it at the end. Awesome job!