Friday, 13 December 2013

Flash Fiction Friday


FLASH

FICTION

FRIDAY



With her virtually naked, and slung over my shoulder, I strode towards the door, letting the fire extinguisher fall from my hand as I reached for the handle. Throwing the door open I walked through it, paused for a second and smiled, before taking another couple of steps forward. Stopping again I flipped her from my shoulder and, as she looked up at me, slowly began undoing my belt.
“Fuck, baby, you look hot,” she purred, staring up at me from the king size bed, “but tomorrow night it's my turn, and I know you'll enjoy what I have in store for you.”

©JSMorbius

12 comments:

Michaela Rhua said...

Sounds like these two are going to have some fun. Like your take on the picture!

Doris O'connor said...

Love it! Gotta love some role play :-)

Naughty Nights Press (NNP); Gina Kincade said...

Hmmmm, this could get interesting! *grin*

S.J. Maylee said...

Aw! I love this couple. You need to write more about them. Great flash.

Naomi said...

Nothing like a bit of role play to spice things up. Great flash

Muffy Wilson said...

This feels so urgent, in the beginning, and I am ready for the save with a flash of fire and heroism. You sucked me in and I wasn't ready for the role play aspect, so this was a great teaser. You got me, and he got her. Tomorrow, they are in for some more fun and games. Let's peek at what happens when it's her turn! Loved your twist, Julez :) xo

Fierce Dolan said...

Ha! That's awesome! I love the tease =)

Dariel Raye said...

LOL. Great post. Now I wanna know what SHE has planned ;-)

Raven McAllan said...

Ohh, you have to show us what she has planned.

Jayn Wilde said...

Great tease

Pablo Michaels said...

Julez you had a great take on this photo. You turned a possibly dangerous story into a tantalizing sexual scene. Will you please write a sequel.

Leann Mitchell said...

Playful Flash! I loved it! :)