FLASH
FICTION
FRIDAY
As
I eased the door open slowly, my hand resting on the gun at my hip,
the sliver of light showed me the faintest outline of her. Pushing
the door more I inched into the room, the light now covering most of
her form. With tears clouding my vision, I was convinced I was too
late.
Blindfolded,
her hands covered with dried blood, I could see my ring still on her
finger and I dropped to my knees by her side.
As
I did one of her eyes opened and a smile began to form on her lips.
“I
knew you'd come.”
©JSMorbius2013
4 comments:
Great flash. Now I need to know more of the story. Who are the characters? What is there relationship but above all why the blood? Please write more Julez.
Ah, great flash. Glad he got to her :-)
Positive and romantic end for her her. Glad she wasn't dead. he wasn't too late.
You've captured quite the moment and delivered it with sweet anticipation. Loved it.
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