Hi everyone and thank you Naomi Shaw for inviting me to partake in Hump Day Hook. for those not in the know every Wednesday a group of writers bring you a paragraph from either a current WIP or published work for your enjoyment and this is my first time.
I have taken paragraph tow from my release Addicted to Charlie for you all to take a peek at. Hopefully you will let me know what you think.
The link for all the other Hooks follows my post please be sure to take a look at everyone else's work also.
Thank You
Addicted to Charlie
Her
body was absolutely perfect. She was five feet, seven inches tall,
had an incredible thirty-six C chest and an all-over tan. She had
gorgeous brunette hair that draped around her shoulders, finishing
halfway down her back. Her teeth sparkled when she smiled as she had
never smoked or had any work done on them. Her eyes were a gorgeous
green that always seemed to catch the light. Oh, and I nearly forgot
to mention that between her legs, where she should have had a neatly
trimmed pussy, she had a magnificent eight inch cock. You see my
Charlie was a transsexual, and if anybody had ever said I would have
ended up in this kind of relationship I would have laughed.
JSMorbius2013
And now here is the promised link
http://humpdayhook.blogspot.co.uk/
16 comments:
Nice job. Looking forward to more.
I loved the turn in the description. A great hook.
Wow! That eight inch cock certainly caught me by surprise. LOL Great hook!
Ooh, fascinating! I wasn't expecting that. Great hook!
Great hook and introduction to your story. Definitely sucks a reader in.
An eight inch cock will certainly catch one's attention in a hurry. It grabbed mine, lol. Great hook! I want more...
What a hook! :D
That's a terrific hook. :) see you next week.
Welcome to the group. Great first hook
Interesting hook. Welcome to the group!
Nice description and it sure grabbed my attention at the end. I like the wry tone too.
Way to throw a twist in there...she sounds gorgeous and I'm really curious where this is going to go. Great hook! Welcome to HDH!
Now that is a hook!!!
Wow! The cock caught me off guard. Great hook!
Well I didn't see that one coming :)
That was unexpected! Great hook, thanks for sharing.
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