Wednesday, 13 February 2013

Hump Day Hook: Addicted to Charlie



Hi everyone and thank you Naomi Shaw for inviting me to partake in Hump Day Hook. for those not in the know every Wednesday a group of writers bring you a paragraph from either a current WIP or published work for your enjoyment and this is my first time.

I have taken paragraph tow from my release Addicted to Charlie for you all to take a peek at. Hopefully you will let me know what you think.

The link for all the other Hooks follows my post please be sure to take a look at everyone else's work also.

Thank You

Addicted to Charlie


Her body was absolutely perfect. She was five feet, seven inches tall, had an incredible thirty-six C chest and an all-over tan. She had gorgeous brunette hair that draped around her shoulders, finishing halfway down her back. Her teeth sparkled when she smiled as she had never smoked or had any work done on them. Her eyes were a gorgeous green that always seemed to catch the light. Oh, and I nearly forgot to mention that between her legs, where she should have had a neatly trimmed pussy, she had a magnificent eight inch cock. You see my Charlie was a transsexual, and if anybody had ever said I would have ended up in this kind of relationship I would have laughed.


JSMorbius2013

And now here is the promised link

http://humpdayhook.blogspot.co.uk/

16 comments:

Lacie Nation said...

Nice job. Looking forward to more.

Ciaran Dwynvil said...

I loved the turn in the description. A great hook.

Jessica Subject said...

Wow! That eight inch cock certainly caught me by surprise. LOL Great hook!

Lucy Felthouse said...

Ooh, fascinating! I wasn't expecting that. Great hook!

Angelica Dawson said...

Great hook and introduction to your story. Definitely sucks a reader in.

Jade Crystal said...

An eight inch cock will certainly catch one's attention in a hurry. It grabbed mine, lol. Great hook! I want more...

Gayle Ramage said...

What a hook! :D

elingregory said...

That's a terrific hook. :) see you next week.

Naomi said...

Welcome to the group. Great first hook

Sandra Sookoo said...

Interesting hook. Welcome to the group!

Flossie Benton Rogers said...

Nice description and it sure grabbed my attention at the end. I like the wry tone too.

Sarah said...

Way to throw a twist in there...she sounds gorgeous and I'm really curious where this is going to go. Great hook! Welcome to HDH!

Gem Sivad said...

Now that is a hook!!!

Alexandra anthony said...

Wow! The cock caught me off guard. Great hook!

Chantal said...

Well I didn't see that one coming :)

Catherine Green said...

That was unexpected! Great hook, thanks for sharing.