Welcome to The Crypt once again .As is normal for a Tuesday I am pleased to be able to bring you my Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser and this week I have taken my writing away from my normal style once again.
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If
it hadn't been for her I would probably never have woken, that was
why I had come to this place, but as she pressed her soft lips
against mine my eyes jolted open and I slowly lifted myself onto my
elbows.
My
eyes took a moment or two to focus but when they finally did I found
myself beneath the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. Her long
golden hair was tied neatly up so it didn't impede her view of me,
her skin was tanned to perfection, she had the body of a Greek
goddess and she was wearing a bikini that looked to be a size or two
too small for her.
I
would have screamed at her, asked her why she had kissed a total
stranger without knowing anything about them, but as soon as I opened
my mouth to speak she pressed her lips against mine once again for
the briefest of moments, before standing and offering me her hand.
I
reached forward but as I did, and my fingers came within millimetres
of hers, she shimmered in the light before slowly fading away,
leaving me to realize no-one was worth killing myself for.
JSMorbius2012
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http://tantalizingtuesday.blogspot.co.uk/2012/11/13-november.html
7 comments:
Powerful post, beautifully written Julez. That's a really nice picture and, as always, you do it justice!
This a good romantic tease. I love the ending. Excellent descriptive tease.
Absolutely beautiful. Romantic with great visuals and a poignant message about life. Love your teaser
That was a trip, thank you, Julez. I was so wrapped up in her I forgot all about the dark place he was in. Beautiful. Well done.
Very interesting tease. Definitely not where I saw it going.
Very romantic there J.S. I was intrigued of your style.
A change of pace and tone, my friend. Life-affirming tease. I love the idea of a sexy supernatural entity who comes to the rescue of desperate men. Intriguing and tender.
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