Tuesday, 13 November 2012

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser: Saved



Welcome to The Crypt once again .As is normal for a Tuesday I am pleased to be able to bring you my Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser and this week I have taken my writing away from my normal style once again.



Saved
If it hadn't been for her I would probably never have woken, that was why I had come to this place, but as she pressed her soft lips against mine my eyes jolted open and I slowly lifted myself onto my elbows.
My eyes took a moment or two to focus but when they finally did I found myself beneath the most beautiful woman I had ever seen. Her long golden hair was tied neatly up so it didn't impede her view of me, her skin was tanned to perfection, she had the body of a Greek goddess and she was wearing a bikini that looked to be a size or two too small for her.
I would have screamed at her, asked her why she had kissed a total stranger without knowing anything about them, but as soon as I opened my mouth to speak she pressed her lips against mine once again for the briefest of moments, before standing and offering me her hand.
I reached forward but as I did, and my fingers came within millimetres of hers, she shimmered in the light before slowly fading away, leaving me to realize no-one was worth killing myself for.

JSMorbius2012

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7 comments:

gemma parkes said...

Powerful post, beautifully written Julez. That's a really nice picture and, as always, you do it justice!

pablomichaels said...

This a good romantic tease. I love the ending. Excellent descriptive tease.

Naomi said...

Absolutely beautiful. Romantic with great visuals and a poignant message about life. Love your teaser

S. J. Maylee said...

That was a trip, thank you, Julez. I was so wrapped up in her I forgot all about the dark place he was in. Beautiful. Well done.

Angelica Dawson said...

Very interesting tease. Definitely not where I saw it going.

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

Very romantic there J.S. I was intrigued of your style.

Jake Malden said...

A change of pace and tone, my friend. Life-affirming tease. I love the idea of a sexy supernatural entity who comes to the rescue of desperate men. Intriguing and tender.