Welcome Creatures of the Night to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. Along with a number of other talented authors each week we are given one picture and challenged to write not more than 100 words for your enjoyment.
I hope you like what I came up with from this week's picture.
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WATCHING
Standing
on the balcony I watched as the gorgeous brunette moved slowly through the
crowded dance floor, rubbing her body against every man she brushed by. I kept
my eye on her for a few more minutes, unable to believe how brazen she was,
before deciding it was time to make my move.
If
I didn’t the club would close and she would vanish into the night and I
couldn’t let that happen, not after I had watched as she picked the pocket of everyone
she rubbed against. Being head of security meant I couldn’t allow her get away
with it.
JSMorbius2012
Now you have seen what I have to offer I hope you take the time to visit all my friends and read their offerings as well.
http://flasherfictionfriday.blogspot.co.uk/2012/10/26-october-2012.html
Thank you
4 comments:
Loved it Julez and l didn't see that coming at all! Beautifully written.
I felt the flow and movement of her and the crowd in your words, very cool. And then the added flavor of the reality of her actions makes for a fun read. Super flash.
Wonderful! The nerve of her! I hope he catches her and she gets a harsh punishment. And I hope those men are more careful in the future too. Great flash!
OMG!! WOW!! I had originally thought ok you were going vampy on this, but then at the end that awesome twist of her being a pick pocket. I wonder what he will do once he catches her. ;-)
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