Friday, 26 October 2012

Flash Fiction Friday: Watching

Welcome Creatures of the Night to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. Along with a number of other talented authors each week we are given one picture and challenged to write not more than 100 words for your enjoyment.

I hope you like what I came up with from this week's picture.


Standing on the balcony I watched as the gorgeous brunette moved slowly through the crowded dance floor, rubbing her body against every man she brushed by. I kept my eye on her for a few more minutes, unable to believe how brazen she was, before deciding it was time to make my move.
If I didn’t the club would close and she would vanish into the night and I couldn’t let that happen, not after I had watched as she picked the pocket of everyone she rubbed against. Being head of security meant I couldn’t allow her get away with it.


Now you have seen what I have to offer I hope you take the time to visit all my friends and read their offerings as well.

Thank you


gemma parkes said...

Loved it Julez and l didn't see that coming at all! Beautifully written.

S. J. Maylee said...

I felt the flow and movement of her and the crowd in your words, very cool. And then the added flavor of the reality of her actions makes for a fun read. Super flash.

Naomi said...

Wonderful! The nerve of her! I hope he catches her and she gets a harsh punishment. And I hope those men are more careful in the future too. Great flash!

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

OMG!! WOW!! I had originally thought ok you were going vampy on this, but then at the end that awesome twist of her being a pick pocket. I wonder what he will do once he catches her. ;-)