Friday, 19 October 2012

Flash Fiction Friday: The Picture: A cautionary tale

Welcome Creatures of the Night to yet another Flash Fiction Friday. Along with a number of other talented authors each week we are given one picture and challenged to write not more than 100 words for your enjoyment.

I hope you like what I came up with from this week's picture.t

The Picture: A Cautionary Tale

“So what do you think Mike?” Amanda purred.
 “I don’t know there’s something that’s just not quite right.”
Amanda stared at him with her seductive vixen look and opened her mouth to speak, only Mike cut her off.
Without warning he stepped forward and ripped off her underwear, before stepping back.
Now you look perfect,” he told her, slipping one hand into his pocket.
“Fuck Mike do you have to be so rough?”
“Is that what you said to Matthew?”
As he spoke he took his hand from his pocket and threw the crumpled, yet virtually identical, photograph at her.


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Bleweyzzz..xoxo said...


Naomi said...

Great flasher. True to the Friday name she is flashing. Sizzle

gemma parkes said...

Oh Oh! naughty girl!

Davee said...

I don't think he liked her indiscretion with the other guy. Wonder how he will discipline her?? :)

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Eeep! Someone is in trouble. I would like to know what happens with Mike and Amanda. Will She come clean or is she in for a long night? Awesome FFF!!