Once again Creatures of the Night it is time for another Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser. This week I have taken a different style and tried to create something that I hope you will enjoy.
I knew he had been
following me for a couple of weeks. I saw things other people couldn’t. As soon
as he first appeared I began to make plans, there was still so much I had to do
before it was time. I didn’t know how long I had all I knew was that there were
places to go and people to see, and with him
watching every move I made I knew I had to hurry.
I was still young, only
43, too young for it to be my time but I knew there was no point trying to run.
He never let anyone escape.
Sitting at my desk I
began to write a list of the most important things that needed to be done, if
it really was my time I wasn’t going until they were completed. I didn’t give a
fuck what he wanted.
I couldn’t believe that
he had waited until my life had just become perfect. I had just got a job and a
new girlfriend.
“Martin Jones it’s time,”
a disembodied voice whispered.
“B-b-but my name’s
Julez,” I replied, to the emptiness.
“Fuck not again,” the
voice said. “Wrong person.”
Then there was silence.
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18 comments:
pmsl
I loved it and the twist at the end.
Well done!
*bites n kisses*
How funny! So even travel to the after life gets screwed up! Wrong reservations! Hahahahahahaha, loved it!!:) xo
You know - that just left me with a haunting feeling - as if I was looking into your soul. Very delicious my dear friend.
Nice twist! Great post.
LMAO Loved this...great - had me at the end of my seat wondering...hope this was a wake up call to enjoy life!
That was great! I'm still laughing. :) Bet he enjoys his life now.
LOL! No...
ROFL! No...
ROFLMAO!
Still not good enough to describe how cool that was.
I was swept in with your first word to your last! Loved it!
Ha! Very funny, l was really drawn in by the atmospheric writing and then the end blew me away!
LMAO, damn Julez! I didn't know you had it in you. I like the comedy twist to it. Awesome job!
Awesome Julez... Neat twist at the end too btw.
What a fabulous TTT. So sad and so beautiful and a little funny too.
I was totally drawn in and winded with the punch line. All that worry. Great teaser!
Great Teaser. Loved your bucket list!
Perfect. LOL I loved it and it was just what I needed to read. It made me smile and laugh...that my friend was much needed. :) You rock and I love your wicked sense of humor. Great Tease.
Oh my god that was funny. Death got it wrong. I definitely giggled at the end. Great teaser!
What a screw up! Well, at least he has time to do the things on his list. Great teaser.
That was great! I kept waiting (and now I really want to know what he added to his list!)
Loved the twist at the end : Well done
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