Tuesday, 15 May 2012

Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser: It's NOT time



Once again Creatures of the Night it is time for another Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser. This week I have taken a different style and tried to create something that I hope you will enjoy.



I knew he had been following me for a couple of weeks. I saw things other people couldn’t. As soon as he first appeared I began to make plans, there was still so much I had to do before it was time. I didn’t know how long I had all I knew was that there were places to go and people to see, and with him watching every move I made I knew I had to hurry.
I was still young, only 43, too young for it to be my time but I knew there was no point trying to run. He never let anyone escape.
Sitting at my desk I began to write a list of the most important things that needed to be done, if it really was my time I wasn’t going until they were completed. I didn’t give a fuck what he wanted.
I couldn’t believe that he had waited until my life had just become perfect. I had just got a job and a new girlfriend.
“Martin Jones it’s time,” a disembodied voice whispered.
“B-b-but my name’s Julez,” I replied, to the emptiness.
“Fuck not again,” the voice said. “Wrong person.”
Then there was silence.

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19 comments:

Vampirique Dezire said...

pmsl
I loved it and the twist at the end.
Well done!

*bites n kisses*

Muffy Wilson said...

How funny! So even travel to the after life gets screwed up! Wrong reservations! Hahahahahahaha, loved it!!:) xo

Cassandre Dayne said...

You know - that just left me with a haunting feeling - as if I was looking into your soul. Very delicious my dear friend.

Lee Brazil said...

Nice twist! Great post.

Havan said...

LMAO Loved this...great - had me at the end of my seat wondering...hope this was a wake up call to enjoy life!

diannehartsock said...

That was great! I'm still laughing. :) Bet he enjoys his life now.

Molly Synthia said...

LOL! No...
ROFL! No...
ROFLMAO!

Still not good enough to describe how cool that was.

Nichelle Gregory said...

I was swept in with your first word to your last! Loved it!

gemma parkes said...

Ha! Very funny, l was really drawn in by the atmospheric writing and then the end blew me away!

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

LMAO, damn Julez! I didn't know you had it in you. I like the comedy twist to it. Awesome job!

Don Abdul said...

Awesome Julez... Neat twist at the end too btw.

VenusBookluvr said...

What a fabulous TTT. So sad and so beautiful and a little funny too.

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Ok,so the cool thing is that now you've got a bucket-list of all the shit you want to do before it really is your time. Hopefully, your new girlfriend didn't read the list and see that you want to fuck her BFF one day. Muwah!!@

Naomi said...

I was totally drawn in and winded with the punch line. All that worry. Great teaser!

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Great Teaser. Loved your bucket list!

Sherry Palmer said...

Perfect. LOL I loved it and it was just what I needed to read. It made me smile and laugh...that my friend was much needed. :) You rock and I love your wicked sense of humor. Great Tease.

Leann Mitchell said...

Oh my god that was funny. Death got it wrong. I definitely giggled at the end. Great teaser!

Bonni S. said...

What a screw up! Well, at least he has time to do the things on his list. Great teaser.

ER Pierce said...

That was great! I kept waiting (and now I really want to know what he added to his list!)

Loved the twist at the end : Well done