Tuesday, 22 May 2012

TANTALIZING TUESDAY TEASER: A VAMPIRE TALE


Greetings Creatures of the Night and welcome, once again, to another Tantalizing Tuesday Teaser. This week I am bringing you a birthday tale with a dark twist, I hope you enjoy.






A Vampire Tale


I walked through the fields, rain lashing against my face, carrying my true love. They wanted to take her from me, but I wasn’t to be denied. The first time my eyes fell on her beauty I knew she was the one and I hadn’t spent months watching, following and finally wooing her to have them take her from me. Everything about her was perfect, the way she dressed, her perfect figure and the fact that she was still pure, still a virgin.
For centuries I had searched for one such as her, one that I wished to spend eternity with and now I had her I was determined nothing was going to take her away from me, especially the villagers from where she came.
This night was the one I chose for a reason, my birthday, and she was my present to myself. I had ghosted into the village, unseen by prying eyes and entered her home like a shadow.
At first she went to scream but as I placed my hand over her mouth, and smiled, she saw the real me for the first time.
“Come my love,” I whispered, scooping her from her bed, just before she fainted.

Thank you for stopping by The Crypt and I hope you will now go forth from here to all the other wonderful authors, that also have a Tantalizing Tuesday Tale for you.


Molly Synthia: http://mollysynthia.com

16 comments:

ER Pierce said...

Totally dark and wicked. Loved it Julez. Will she accept him? Will she love him? Hmm, what is going to happen next, I wonder.

Jade said...

Oh such a romantic post. True love, right? Dark and true. I love it

Kharisma Rhayne said...

Oh great post...I absolutely love the image as well...it's like an entire book could come from it.
Anyway...great TT :D

Don Abdul said...

How romantic.

diannehartsock said...

Loved this! Creepy and romantic. I'm dying to know what he really looks like. Wonderfully beautiful or terrifyingly unnatural. Great beginning to a story. ;)

Naomi said...

Excellent teaser. Sends shivers down my spine. Where is he taking her, what happens next? You have to carry this on

gemma parkes said...

Your writing fits the picture so well, dark and disturbing and yet, eerily romantic! Loved it!

Lee Brazil said...

eerily romantic- let true love triumph :)

Muffy Wilson said...

Wicked, wonderful, wild and sensuous, Julez. To be whisked away, in the arms of a lover for all eternity.......the passion is not lost on any of us. Happy Birthday to him. Lucjy us to have a peek at his desires and passionate desire. Loved it, Julez:) xo

Bonni S. said...

Excellent TTT. Is she a lucky woman or is she doomed? What a happy birthday for him. He got exactly what he wanted.

VenusBookluvr said...

Beautifully creepy TTT! I loved it and I want more. . .

Author Cyril J. Michael said...

Fantastic Teaser! I hope she wants to be with him!

Molly Synthia said...

Wicked and sexy! I wish I could be there when she wakes up!

Havan said...

I want to be freaked for the girl's sake...but he loves her - and a part of me thinks that she will be taken care of better with him than anyone...that might be the romantic in me - darn I thought I squelched that...lol

Loved it! :)

Sherry Palmer said...

Man you are good. You had me captivated thinking the villagers were going to get him. I loved it and can't wait for more of your stories. :)

Benjamin Tiberius Russell said...

Julez, first I want to say this is a cool TTT, it speaks to the picture perfectly. However, I've got be honest, I couldn't stop laughing at the line about how he'd been searching for centuries to find a virgin. Sorry, I know that's not exactly what you meant, but that's just how my mind works. I'm thinking fuck, he's lucky it only took him centuries to find a virgin. Anyway, great post.