Stifling a yawn I
wondered why I had me agreed to accompany Zara to the musical in the
first place. For the last two hours I had fought to stay awake, out
of courtesy to her, but felt I was fighting a losing battle, or at
least I had been.
Suddenly the most
handsome man I had ever seen appeared on stage and, seemingly, stared
straight at me, his piercing eyes penetrating deep in to my soul. I
was so transfixed by his beauty I didn't notice the look in Zara's
eyes as she smiled, and nodded her head knowingly towards him.
©JSMorbius
9 comments:
Oh wow! That last line was the killer. When will he notice. Great flasher
Hmm what does she have planned? Something good I expect.
Ooh, now, what has she set him up for?
Planted, hook, line, and sinker. This is a stunning, cleverly disguised set up if I ever saw one. Wonderful twist, Julez! You woke us all up with this flash. Very clever, indeed. You are such a pro, even tho you are not feeling well, you sstill write to entertain us. Feel better. xo
I thought he was going to be disappointed until I read more into your last line. Suspense awaits as what happens next. Great Flash in so few words.
You definitely got me wanting more with this one. I wonder what they have in store for him?
Now that's a hook you've left us hanging on! We want to know more!
I thought it was one thing and it ended up being something else, at the end. That was game-changing. Nice!
This is awesome! I want to know more about her little plan and from her gaze I can tell she knows this performer. I sooo want to know more of what happens. Love your details as I felt like I was there watching it all unfold.
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