Friday, 29 August 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: The woman in gold


The woman in gold

Opening my eyes I found myself laying flat, on a cold metal table, in front of a mirror. As I went to get up I saw I was completely naked and unable to do more than sit, thanks to a thick strap tied around my waist.
Confused I was about to yell, hoping someone would hear, when the room began filling with smoke. Thinking there was a fire I finally screamed but, suddenly, found myself unable to make a sound as a woman dressed in gold appeared through the mirror, and began sliding her ass up over my thighs, towards my hardness


©JSMorbius

9 comments:

Muffy Wilson said...

Oh, yeah.....surprise!! That is a very clever take on this photo, Julez. I loved it and your take. Bet he is in no hurry to be rescued now! xo

Raven McAllan said...


BE still my heart. OMG, this is fantastic

Michaela Rhua said...

Love that fact that she comes out of the mirror. Very clever.

Naomi said...

Wonderful flash. A story you could continue

Jorja Lovett said...

Love your descriptions. Very good interpretation :)

Angelica Dawson said...

I hope the room isn't actually burning down! They might not notice right away. ;)

Dariel Raye said...

You are SO creative, Julez! The woman coming out of the mirror is so sexy sci-fi ;-)

Doris O'connor said...

Oooh, that's such a clever take, Julez :-)

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Shivers. mmmmm yumm!! ohhh This is awesome Julez!! Def have me hooked. I want to know what happens to him. :) Great flash!