Friday, 20 June 2014

Flash Fiction Friday: Under his spell


It's Friday and that can only mean one thing, I'm flashing for you again. 

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Under his spell

A chill coursed through my body, as if I was being watched, the second I picked the skull ornament off the stall. Placing it carefully back down I spun around, to see who was watching and suddenly felt weak at the knees.
He was standing in the door way, his dark muscular body looking as if it had been carved from ebony, his eyes fixed firmly on me, and the longer he stared the weaker I felt.
Without meaning to I found myself walking, in an almost hypnotic like trance, towards him and, even though I tried, I was powerless to resist.


©JSMorbius

6 comments:

Mangus Khan said...

Well done....solid use of your 100 words

Naomi said...

Love the power in his look. Great flasher

Angelica Dawson said...

I got hung up on the skull. Is it part of a spell?

The AfterDark World with Ray Sostre said...

An awesome flash dude! You're going to have to get this piece expanded. What do you say?

Doris O'connor said...

You gave me chills. Awesome flash :-)

Rolling Muse in The Roses said...

Wow! Awesome intense flash. Very umm vampy ;-) I loved it. I want to know more! :) Great flash.