Friday, 12 April 2013

Flash Fiction Friday: Crushed




Crushed

The traffic had been murder, a phrase that had always brought a smile to my lips on days I had work, until I had pulled onto the highway but as soon as I had I'd floored the accelerator with such venom I was surprised I hadn't put my foot, as well as the pedal, through the floor.
Not that it would have mattered if I had seeing as this hunk of junk, along with the unfortunate bastard in the trunk who had been screwing my client's wife for months, was going in the crusher the minute I reached my destination.


©JSMorbius2013

6 comments:

S. J. Maylee said...

Gross, Julez :) but you gave us a big picture here filled with all kids of story. Intriguing and gross, lol.

Angelica Dawson said...

Whoa. Didn't see that ending coming. Very mysterious circumstances!

Naomi said...

Excellent flash with an unexpected ending. Well done!

Doris O'connor said...

Oooh, loved that end. Deliciously dark!

gemma parkes said...

Loved your take on this Julez!

Pablo Michaels said...

Definitely a darker side of you. You intrigued me with what was going to happen to this guy in the trunk. Great Flash.