Friday, 20 July 2012

Flash Fiction Friday: The Ice Queen

Friday is upon us once again and as is the case with Friday I just can't help flashing.

One picture and only 100 words. 

Is it possible to tell a tale in such few words? Read below and see what you think.


I watched as the final piece of ice melted slowly, the water trickling between the valley of her breasts and knew that I didn’t have long to wait. It had been days since I had found her, encased in the tomb of ice, but days were nothing compared to the years I had been searching.
Placing my mouth over hers I passed my breath into her over and over until I eventually saw her chest begin to rise and fall, slowly, but I knew then everything was going to be okay. The Ice Queen was finally back where she belonged.


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S. J. Maylee said...

Oh, Julez, so intriguing!! I need to know what happens next.

Savannah Chase said...

Oh this is fantastic. The start of a really good story. Loved it.

pablomichaels said...

Great job and interpretation.

Muffy Wilson said...

What a delicious interpretation, Julez!! Every man's dream, an indebted woman who needs warming up. She owes him her very breath!! This was very sensuous and spectaculare beginning , I hope, of more to come. I loved it:) xo

VenusBookluvr said...

Wonderful Flasher! Love the direction you took with this, you totally hooked me. I want more!!

diannehartsock said...

So interesting! Who is she? How does he know her? I was thinking archeologist, but then he thought 'back where she belonged' as if he knew her personally. I want more of this story!

Veronica Fredricks said...

Fantastically fantastic post! You have a great story here.