tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5254129082067650142.post385240489171282003..comments2023-10-15T10:20:21.080+01:00Comments on THE CRYPT OF MORBIUS: Sinful Sunday Short: Consummating our relationshipJulian Sponghttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09116901320575396141noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5254129082067650142.post-30742452103051214882013-03-17T14:50:19.704+00:002013-03-17T14:50:19.704+00:00Writing this in first person was very effective fo...Writing this in first person was very effective for your story. Kyle's first time was written precisely with good detail and believable. Your words flowed naturally and kept me wanting to push on to the ending. Very well done.pablo michaelshttp://www.pmmanmanromance.comnoreply@blogger.com